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I walked out of the elevator to find myself in Zim’s attic. I groaned, “ Zim, what am I doing here?”
Zim seemed to ignore my question, and instead walked passed me, to a book shelf. He picked out a book, and opened it, apparently scanning the contents.
He began to hum lightly as he looked tough the pages. I rolled my eyes, and sat on the floor, that’s when I noticed the pain. I hissed a bit, and looked down at my torso. It was covered in bite marks, and scratches. .
Dib whimpered, “Z-Zim?”
“What do you want? Stupid big-headed-fool-boy-creature. . .” Zim sighed, as he continued with his reading.
“Where did these bites marks come from?” I asked worriedly, hoping Zim would bother answering.
“From me. . .” Zim said frown on his face, yet never looking up from his book.
“How about the scratches?” I asked, surprised.
“Zim did that to.” Zim answered, still never looking up from his book.
I frowned deeply, why did he bite me? What did he do to me in those hours?
“Why?” I asked.
“Why what?” Zim now looked up from his book, lekku pressed back agents his head.
“Why in the Hell, would you bite me!” I exclaimed angrily.
“Because Dib-stink, you told me to.” Zim growled.
“No I didn’t! I don’t remember ever giving you the permission to do this!” I growled back.
“You lie!” Zim screamed at me, then he looked back down to his book.
I sighed and examined my body further. There was something that caught my eye, on the back of my shoulder, but I couldn’t quiet see it. . .
“Zim? Do you have a mirror around here?” I asked Zim.
“In there, return quickly.” Zim pointed to a door, and I nodded.
I stood from my place in the floor, and walked into the room. It was like any other bathroom I had ever seen, except for the over sized bathtub, big enough for at least four to five people.
I walked over to the mirror, and turned to see my back. What I saw shocked me. . .
It was a tattoo, of the Irken symbol.
           
Prologue: [link]
Ch. 1: Your here!
Ch. 2: [link]
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ADickson10193 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
wow funny thingies thingy very started now yes. How did you think so this story so much now.
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
I just do what I do. . . I write on paper first if that helps :P
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ADickson10193 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
that's a very good thing i'm exactly really love that story and i'm doing a comic book voting on deviantart and facebook if you have facebook you can check my deviantart.
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
I don't have a Facebook but I'll check you deviantart
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ADickson10193 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
thax for the votine comic book message thank.
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emmabug12345 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student
ooooh I can tell this is gonna be gooood ^^
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
:D im glad you think so
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emmabug12345 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student
When do you plan to get the next chapter up?! O-O I want to know if Dib's gonna be ok!!! :)
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
lol idk i just made these chapters. . . maybe pretty soon if ya want! :D
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emmabug12345 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student
oh yes pretty please!!! ^^ can't wait for it!!! :3
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
okay lol
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Annaley Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Prolouge: DONE

Chapter 1: DONE

Chapter 2: pending

Chapter 3: pending
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
yay
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Rainbow--Dash--MLP Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Ooh! Awesome chapter!
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Im glad yew like it! :D
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Rainbow--Dash--MLP Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
I have to say, the next chapter made me feel uncomfortable, but it was still well written.
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Well thank you. You've been helping me with our RP, I learn a lot from rp, so thank you for that!
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Rainbow--Dash--MLP Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Aw, any time! You're fun to RP with! By the way, sorry for not replying. There's an error with the note system.
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
I got it fixed :P I just restarted my phone's internet :P and I'm glad! I have fun with it!
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WhiteIris16 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
OOO~ Zim tattooed Dibeh!
I like it... :iconsatanrapefaceplz:
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Do you like how i added that? Really?! I wasn't sure if i should or not. . . lol
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WhiteIris16 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
I love it. I'm a huge fan of Dib having an Irken tattoo.
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
yay! so am i! :D
How about the whole bite mark think? What does that leave you to think?
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WhiteIris16 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Not gonna lie, it makes me think of some crazy drunken smex scene :3
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
good enough *Shrugs* Next one will be out soon, i am in a typing mood today :P
I might add a sex scene in the next one, but it would be rape if i did lol
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WhiteIris16 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
...This is so exciting! :D
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Cutediepie Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
oh muy. . .lol so is that a yes to the sex scene in the next chapter?
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